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#1811 - 09/19/02 07:16 AM Please listen and comment on my songs
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Hi Guys,

Im a self taught singer/guitarist/songwriter. These are my first ever efforts. Please listen and review if you want to.

Peace.

The first is called This Time

- by Melon

Verse1:
Your lover's tears roll down her face
The Universe puts you in your place
Sit alone and wonder why
Does the pain go when you die
When you Die

Chorus:
This time
Ill never let you go
Youre mine
and I have to let you know
This time
Ill never let you go
Youre Mine This Time

Verse 2:
Your Lover's Heart once pounded truth
Innocence lost in your youth
Now the years have washed away
The stains of ruin - of decay
Of Decay Aye Aye

Chorus:
This time
Ill never let you go
Youre mine
and I have to let you know
This time
Ill never let you go
Youre Mine This Time


Bridge:
These are tears of joy not tears of pain
You have to lose before you gain
Feel the fire that burns for you
Hotter than the Month of June
The one thing my Heart must do
Is open up her doors to you
and be filled with Golden love
Sent by Angels from above

Chorus:
This time
Ill never let you go
Youre mine
and I have to let you know
This time
Ill never let you go

Youre Mine This Time
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The second is called:
Sorrow

Hope is
Often a misused word.
Some think its desire.
Or confuse it with greed.
I know it’s not anger.
But it makes me feel that way.
When I think of what’s left here
Now that hope’s gone away.

Lonely.
Not just being alone.
It’s a terrible feeling.
And it’s worse in a crowd.
I know I have felt it
And it nearly drove me insane
When I lost all my feelings
So I couldn’t feel pain.

And the one thing that I feel
The one thing that makes it seem so real
Is

Chorus:

Sorrow Sorrow
Living like there’s no tomorrow
One feeling I cant hide

Sorrow Sorrow
Why does my heart feel so hollow?
Without you by my side

Sorry.
Did you mean what you said?
You’ve said it too often
But it’s not often true.
I know you’re not sorry
I don’t expect you to be.
When I know how you feel
You feel nothing for me.

Cruelty.
You’re a specialist at that.
You hurt me for pleasure
You get joy from the pain.
I know you love no one
Except you that’s for sure
Your heart just keeps beating
You don’t know what it’s for.

And the one thing that I feel
The one thing that makes it seem so real
Is
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