Hi,just heard your song.Not bad.Bass and drums just a bit simple for my taste(but then bass is my weapon of choice).I'm no expert,and music is so varied in styles,no one can really say if any song is right or wrong.It's all down to how it sounds in your head,and getting it recorded that way.It's always a struggle(it is for me anyway!).Great to hear your music,thank you.
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